Monday 22 September 2014

Fear of the Unknown - Part 1: An Example Story



Imagine a man named George who was walking one day through a crowded street. All was normal, and he was not thinking of anything that would be out of the ordinary. However, when ahead a part of the street was clear of most people, he saw five little animals walking about the place on all-fours and had their faces to the ground. Curious, he got a little closer. Before getting dangerously close, he stopped. One of the animals raised its head to look at George. Their eyes met. George stared at it, stunned. It had a face like a pug dog, but this thing was taller than one of those kinds of dogs, had big eyes with pupils like a goat’s pupils, three little horns poked out of its forehead, and right below the horns, between the two disturbingly strange eyes, a little light from an unknown source flashed red, green, yellow, and blue. The little thing, standing about three feet high, approached George, came too close for his comfort and stopped. They stared at each other for a longer time, then a low, gurgling growl came from the animal. It bared its tall fangs which looked red from blood, whether it was its own blood or something else’s blood, George could not discern. George backed away, looked at the person next to him, who, amazingly, acted as if nothing strange was happening, and looked back at the animal, from which he had not kept his gaze more than a second. However, when George brought his eyes back to where the animal was, all five of the creatures had vanished.

George did not know how long he had been staring at those things. Maybe he was hallucinating, he thought. He went to a man nearby who was selling out water and asked the water-man if he had seen the things, describing them to the man and telling him how they had vanished.  The water-man became concerned for George and gave him a couple of water bottles for free. George accepted it, went to sit on a bench, and tried to not let himself think about it anymore.

He walked home alone, which was not far from the place. It was getting dark, and he hoped to get home before sundown, because he did not bring a flashlight with him. He heard a noise on the side of the road which he assumed was made by a squirrel or something of the like. He thought little of it until five dark shapes started appearing ahead of him, coming from both sides of the road.  Four of them had their heads facing the ground, just as he had seen them do in the town. The fifth one looked around a bit, almost as if to see if anyone else was watching, then approached George. It got even closer than it had before. George dared not move. The thing looked him up and down, then it opened its mouth and, instead of barking like George expected, it let out a low, rumbling noise like thunder in the distance. The five other creatures looked up and slowly walked toward George. They surrounded him, all with their strange, disturbing faces looking at him, motionless. George trembled in fear. The odd faces the things had were what kept George from doing anything in self-defense. These things were not dogs, and they certainly seemed much more ferocious than any dog he had ever seen. For all George knew, these animals could do anything to him, and they did not seem to want to do a nice thing. George and these animals stood there seemingly for an eternity, until the five things moved closer and closer to him. Another low, thunder-like rumble sounded, and the creatures vanished.

George did not know whether or not he could move. If they could instantly become invisible at will, then he did not want to move, touch one of the invisible things, and make them angry. He stood there for a while, not knowing whether to think of himself as an idiot for believing a silly hallucination or to really believe what he saw.  Finally, he built up the courage to take a step forward. Nothing happened. He took another baby step. Still, nothing happened – no sound, nothing touching him, no odd smells, nothing invisible reappearing to scare him again. He remained motionless once more, heart pounding, breathing heavily despite his trying to be quite. He clenched his fist and ran down the road until reaching his home, locking all of the doors, closing and covering the windows, and ended up sleeping with several lights still on in the house.

He never saw those animals again.


~ Fintan.

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